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lil  ·  3935 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: "in thy beauty is the dilemma of flutes" (e. e. cummings - "My Love" )

The words are pretty -- but what does he think of her?

    thy head is a quick forest/filled with sleeping birds

    thy head is a casket/of the cool jewel of thy mind

He's saying, I think, that she's brain dead.

I think if I was his love I'd be insulted...