Mind if I share some edits with you? Just some ideas, of course, not saying that this is what you were going for or what you envisioned, just something to think about. I got on the bus today: no timetable, no ticket
No cheating
I'm tired of cheating No cut corners, no round trips, no stops
No broken-glass promises, no
Excuses Sitting on a bus when it hungers to life
Is being inside the stomach of
A lurching beast I learned to focus on buildings,
Then the forest sliding by in
Time with my heart I learned that if you let it
A bus ride can grow
Dreams And I learned to leave some dreams
Behind, waiting only
In memory I learned the journey will never end
As long as I am still
Moving