Feel free to forward it on to me / other hubskiers, I know people on here have helped with editing these in the past. It's probably on the distasteful end to request them to redo it, but is there anyone who has worked more closely with you who can write more specifics than that? I ended up having mentors / grad students write the letters while the professors edited / signed off on them.I wrote my letter of purpose last week, its being edited by a friend right now.
One of them had a long enthusiastic letter (with details about my work etc.) while the other simply wrote a paragraph of "I recommend Cumol for a PhD position" and I have a feeling that it doesn't do me justice somehow... The two letters are so different, I fear that people would question the "good" letter.