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kleinbl00 · 3476 days ago · link · · parent · post: I got some great and honest feedback from you guys on a drawing I did. Can I have some more?
First: better than I'll ever be. Nice job. Second: the white at the lower right corner annoyed me at first, but I couldn't figure out why, then I settled into it. Third: I think it struck me as off because this work is a study in perspective focused on the cabin. There's no foreground and the background vanishes to infinity. The cabin, then, suffers from an undue focus and the perspective is imperfect. You did a great job of drawing the eye to the cabin, but the perspective and orthogonality are just off enough to jar. Worthy of note : this perspective study has been presented to us through warped perspective, which is probably magnifying its (minor) faults. The next one, I reckon, will be spectacular.