by CashewGuy

Bonjour!

I've been wanting to adapt my book into a screenplay, but to better get the pacing and format of a screenplay down, I wrote a short story and adapted it into this screenplay. I'd love to get any feedback (good and bad) so that I can better this story and process.

The screenplay is a 13 page PDF (61 kb), hosted on Cloud.

Edit: I moved the screenplay to Dropbox so a download isn't required.

I'm thinking of two more parts to this story, but I may not write them.

Thanks!