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humanodon  ·  4061 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: Water

Nice. I still think that this can be developed, if you're of a mind to. I don't know if that little break in the dashes is intentional, but it does give the sense that entropy has entered the system of the poem.