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mk  ·  3384 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Birds Vol II - Poetry Out Loud - E. H. Brogan OC

This one is solid.

I've read it and told you the same, but hearing you read it, I'm reminded of why.

Did you do more than one take? I agree that it improves. Maybe you could read it three times without pause and take the second or third.