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I'm glad you didn't delete this. I think the idea was that he didn't get credit for the thing he created. It was a stream of consciousness thing. Just an exercise to write as fast as I could. He doesn't bleed to death, the crimson is what I'd imagine takes over your field of vision when you suffocate. There's a lot of me in this, except for the part where the guy is suicidal. -Had to add some drama :-) edit: I'm not much of a writer but I'd like to keep trying my hand at it. I feel like it's a nice creative outlet when I can't grab a guitar and record.