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TheGreatAbider16  ·  3672 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: Put on the Music

  Not always, but sometimes, when I put on some music,
  I shed my shirt to the floor, drop my jeans, don
  My thin, black and white pants from Dresden, drown perfectly. 
  
  I frantically vibrate about the room, dance ecstatic energy.
  Due dates, death, daily drudgery fall from my shoulders
  Against their will, like boulders released in a landslide 

  Ecstatic beads of grinning, greasy sweat pour forth 
  From my face through the ancient dance, each second tastes
  Newer than the salty last, and the present moment is torn
  From its neglected seat in my harried mind.




lil  ·  3672 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Abider! wow - thanks for joining the poetry prompt responders.

        each second tastes
  Newer than the salty last
rezzeJ and humanodon _refugee_ I think we have another talented poet in our midst.
TheGreatAbider16  ·  3671 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Hey thank you for the warm welcome!