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nowaypablo  ·  3553 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Write SHORTER SENTENCES Dammit




lil  ·  3553 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Yup, that's a list of suggestions that I refer to over and over again. It's particularly useful for story writing: Every sentence should develop character or advance plot.

Now can we get long-winded people to do that in conversation too?