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comment by onehunna
onehunna  ·  4171 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Wish You Were Here

Thank you for the feedback homie. I think the word I wanted instead of 'irradiated' is 'iridescent'--not sure how I jumbled those two.

On the level of detail of what has happened to Arthur--definitely trying to strike a fine balance between ambiguity and vague understanding there. I'll continue to try and fine tune that aspect of the story.