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user-inactivated  ·  3510 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Oh god help me write my student council president speech last-minute! [Garbage/conceptual draft included]

Your document reads like some Groundhog Day-esque horror. It just keeps repeating itself, like you're hoping for it to get better...

In any case, I would genuinely like to help, but halfway through I realize nothing I could say would help, because my best advice would be "fuck all of that shit and just drop out," but that's because we're inherently different people and I felt like vomiting just reading that shit.

Politics.

That being said, if you want grammar shit I guess I'm your guy. I'll also ping kleinbl00 'cause you're too shy to - I know you know that dude has more charisma in his left pinky than most of us do in our entire bodies.





nowaypablo  ·  3510 days ago  ·  link  ·  

There is literally no hope of editing my draft, most of it is scrambled at this point. sorry :D

kingmudsy  ·  3509 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Hey pabs, are you still taking suggestions or are you just planning on using kb's speech?

nowaypablo  ·  3509 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Literally just gave the speech! I took ideas from kb's but didn't really use it entirely. Thanks though!

kingmudsy  ·  3509 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Well, how did it go?

nowaypablo  ·  3509 days ago  ·  link  ·  

For Pubski!!