If I could make one change, it would be the pacing. There is a huge difference between the opening sequences and the sampling of youtubers. The former feels well done, that latter is... frenetic at times. I had a hard time getting engaged with parts of the film because of that. Other ideas: - If I find one person's story compelling, there isn't a way for me investigate that further. Maybe show their name or a link when they first appear? - Pizza shirt lady feels forced in. She does offer opposing views which then get addressed, but this video is a collage of film snippets anyways. Those snippets don't really need an opponent to answer. It doesn't change the message of the film (or at least the one I got) if you just skip over her.
I tried to keep the video as short as possible while including as many people as possible and still have a somewhat cohesive message so that's probably why the pace got compromised. I'll bear this in mind in the future. Your point about naming the speakers as they appear instead of relying on credits is also a good one. I was hoping that, pizza shirt lady or Sorsha Morava, would lighten things up a bit with her satire of meat eating arguments regularly heard by vegans. I understand they don't add to the message but I was hoping it would give non-vegans an insight of what those meat eating counter arguments sound like against the arguments for animal rights. Thank you for watching and the constructive feedback.