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ecib  ·  4592 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Amazing Poem
You forgot a line:

Remain sitting at your table and listen. Don’t even listen; simply wait. Don’t even wait. The world will offer itself freely to you. To be unmasked, it has no choice. It will roll in ecstasy at your feet. Its cold black shell clacking against the table leg.

Such a beautiful poem.





b_b  ·  4592 days ago  ·  link  ·  
Thanks. Didn't see that in the version I read.
ecib  ·  4592 days ago  ·  link  ·  
Well, I was slightly kidding :) It's what he meant to write, I swear!
b_b  ·  4592 days ago  ·  link  ·  
Haha. That's hilarious. You got me, because it does make that poem sound so much more Kafka!
ecib  ·  4592 days ago  ·  link  ·  
:D