I get that this is a "slice of life" piece, but I really think that the reader needs more opportunities to be invested in the "I" of this. There's a whole lot of detail, but what does it accomplish for the reader? It's one thing to slip into another's shoes, but at least the reader deserve to know whose shoes and why.

I saw in your other post that you argued about the use of the coma in the story wasn't an "and it was all a dream" cop-out, but what strikes me about that piece and this one is that both accomplish the same thing. The reader is brought back to square one, which is unfair to them, since they have done the work of reading the piece.

Consider your audience for this piece. The place where you've posted it is populated by people either in their 20's or not too far removed (for the most part). A lot of what is in the piece is familiar territory. What is this piece bringing to the table for them? What is your motivation for presenting it, other than to gain exposure for yourself? That said, trying to gain exposure isn't a bad thing, but showing your work must also be about showing people what you as a writer can provide for them.

Now, to nitpick. The most important thing for this character is air conditioning and yet, it doesn't seem like it's the prime motivation for the "I"'s being in the library (it must be local to wherever the "I" is located, otherwise, the "I" wouldn't be there), so why is it so prominent? Furthermore, it derides the internet and social media which you are posting to.

And the title. Is it the best one for this piece?

I am aware that you did not ask for criticism, so please understand that this is coming from a person who wants to see others succeed.