Damn, nice work, thenewgreen! The introduction of Pak and the foil (or even binary) he provides to Ashley is going to be really interesting, I can tell.
Thanks Ash! I've not heard from onehunna about whether or not he is down for the next part. If need be, would you be down with writing it? It anyone else?
Yeah, I can definitely take up the mantle if onehunna doesn't take it by tonight, I guess. Pretty sweet place to pick up from.
Cool. Just an FYI I made a small edit which gives context to the time in which Pak is when Ashley runs by.
Hey guys, I have to pass my turn for now--kind of busy getting things ready for a move. AshShields, take the reins my dude.
Thanks for the heads up onehunna, good luck with the move. Ash, take your time, the story is getting more complex. Just good to know someone is on it.
I guess I sort of unwittingly took the "take your time" advice to heart, sorry it's been so long. Finally settled into a new apartment, the next part should be up today.