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ButterflyEffect  ·  4384 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: A Flightless Bird -A song I wrote with a parental advisory warning

That was a really tight track, I loved the end section even with the "like a motherfucking bird" part thrown in, though I think it would have been better with that muted. Still a great track.

Maybe it was for the best, that's a pretty funny story.





thenewgreen  ·  4384 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Yeah, I think it probably was for the best. She wasn't very secure in her playing yet. Thanks for the feedback re the song. I think it has some potential for sure. I want to re-record the lead vox and do a track an octave higher. I think I'll push myself on this one to sing in a higher register.

ButterflyEffect  ·  4384 days ago  ·  link  ·  

You should post it if you do that! This song has a nice 60's vibe to it during some parts with the riffs and backing vocals.

user-inactivated  ·  4384 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Agree about the '60s vibe, especially w/backing vocals. Opening is mellow like a lazy Donovan tune.

I admit to laughing when the crescendo ended with "like a motherfucking biiiiird."

thenewgreen  ·  4384 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Will do. Thanks again!