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thenewgreen · 4204 days ago · link · · parent · post: Today's Writing Prompt: "Heaven Is a Corner Store/That Went Out of Business"
I'm no poet, just enjoy stringing words together and creating some imagery. I suppose I changed the line lengths in order to show a shift in style, it becomes an interaction at that point with actual dialog. Thanks for the feedback, glad someone read it. BTW, I actually started the poem thinking that "Heaven" could have literally been the name of the store. She could be the owner of the closed store waiting for some good news.